Death Of 1000 Cuts

Another episode of the no-nonsense podcast for anyone trying to write fiction, presented by Tim Clare, author of The Honours and We Can't All Be Astronauts. Each show we take a look at the first page of a novel or short story by a novice author, and try to find ways of making it better. Please support me by buying my novel, THE HONOURS: https://wordery.com/the-honours-tim-clare-9781782114765#oid=1908_1